PN1+Feedback

Date: Your name: Author’s name: Title of Narrative: **Ideas and Content:** Is the writing clear and focused? If so, how? If not, why not? What is this piece about? How is it connected to the idea of culture or cultural misunderstanding? Does it hold the reader’s attention? Why? **Organization:** How is this piece organized? Is there a clear beginning and end? Are they effective? Why/why not? Are you left with a message or theme to ponder? How was it communicated to you? **Voice:** Do you feel connected with the writer, sensing the person behind the words? **Word Choice:** Do the words in the narrative get the message across in a precise interesting and natural way? Why or why not? Any suggestions? **Conventions:** Are standard writing conventions employed? Grammar, spelling, capitalization, punctuation, paragraphing? Have you made the necessary changes in the text? What is your overall reaction to the narrative? Why?
 * __PN Peer Critique__**